So...many...legs!! Weird...but I like it! Well done!

whoa...how were you able to manage so many legs?!?! Well, since I'm not sparing any picture this time around, I have two corrections to make. 1) The centipedal creatures tail and the rider's right wing seem strangely positioned 3D-wise. 2) Since you have a human shape (even with the dragon scales and wings) the long neck of the rider looks really awkward. Other than that, this picture is really really good, and I thoroughly applaud you for managing so many legs of one creature!!

That's insanity right there... *hides from centipede thing* You're getting better...oh, and the shading on the centipede is really nice!

The insectiod crature is really good, but yes, you should work a bit on the rider's body, even if his wings are yet pretty good. But on the hole, this is nicely done, and I agree with Jade shadding is good too!

i agree with everyone and definately better than i could do!

hmm...on second note...are all the legs completely moveable? some of the ones in contact with the ground twist in unusual postitions...

I dunno really. If you saw this in my DA you would have read that it was an impulse-drawing; the idea hit me in English. I didn't really put all that effort into the legs, moreover I was honing my shading technique. And the rider was hell to put in; I actually drew around 85% of the centepede thing before I drew her. So it was kinda forced. But I have drawn something new that kinda straigtens out the problem of a long neck on a human-proportions creature. But thanks for all the comments and crits, I really need to know what I need to do to make my pictures better!

And I haven't really drawn anything in such a while, so I think that plays a role. This was to practise a TON of different things all at once, so it looks kinda crammed.

*waves arms frantically* IS ANYONE ON!!???

I am!

JEWEL!!! *glomps* (took me a lttle while to reply cause I had to restart my computer)

Computers hate me.

hellos peeps >^n.n^<

@Jewel, same.... *looks around suspiciously then grins mischieviously*

<.< >.> sumthins fishy and its not the tuna in the fridge! (xD)

XD lolz, OH oh, read my profile, I has updated it C:

read it n.n awesome omg (C: < big nosed guy!

I should read it! Sorry it was a while, change of class periods

oh oh, RP!!!! *squeals*

RP?

*squeals louder* YESH!! let's has RP!!!

Who starts?

anyone, I don't really have any ideas...C:

shweetness lets have an RP!

*squeals louder still* it's hard to sleep when you've had four cans of red-bull!!!! and you're half way through you're fifth!!

redbull: it gives you wings xD wow its like 12:15 pm..... anyways i dunno of any ideas....

XD, *laughs hystericaly for no reason*

OK... want me to start?

Sure ^^

I've never done this before..... We are in a Lion King-like environment, surrounded by sleeping hyenas. We are stripped of any weapons. As we are treading slowly out, catc steps on a twig. One hyena's blood-shot eyes snaps open.

sure n.n

*semi-glares at catc* nice one -__-'

O.O oops

*freezes as hyena sleepily advances* *whispers* We... should... get... out of heree...

*black fire burst into being around my hands* stay back beast! *side glances at Jewel* good idea... but what about our weapons?

*quickly stars to softly hum to lull him back to sleep*

*takes a few steps back**accidentally steps on a female hyena's tail*

oh too late *gets into battle stance* ( i luvs lion king n.n )

Crud! Am I the only one here who isn't a clut- *I'm cut off as a step on another hyena's foot* Hehe ^^ oops

*pulls water around self*

jinxed urself n.n wat do we do now? <.< >.> *looks around at the awakening hyenas* hope there isn't a certain evil lion about wait! *breathes out ice srystals as they freeze a wall around us.....* at least we'll have time to think...

*fall into battle stance as the fire extends to my elbows*

*Steps up* Hey, what are you guys doing to my friends? *Points to the hyenas*

Gorirazu! THANK GOD

Oh, it looks like they're hungry. Um...anyone got spare food? Any at all?

*has blank look on face* Who is Gorir-whozit now? And no, I only feed on blood.

oh hellos i dont think we've met before but thank goodness ur here as jewel said!

My friend. He's also good with these hostile-type creatures.

If we feed the hyenas, they'll calm right down.

thats good

Ok! BRB *flies off*

Ohhh! ok ^^, um thank god you're here.. I think?

Now, let's see if I can stall them. They can bite through bone, you know... *Puts up a shield*

*returns a few minutes later, a bloody deer slung over my shoulder*

*peers at hyenas over the icy wall* u v.v u < supposed to be a thing looking down with hands on top of somethin....

Just throw that down here, quickly!

I know ^^, (did you know that they're more closely related to felines than canines) *circle of fire appears around me* this better work! *drools slightly at smell of blood*

*tosses deer to the hungry hyenas*

Stand back. I don't think they'll appreciate us disturbing their meal.

(darn slow internet) *backs away from wall as the deer is slung down*

*watches them dimish it to nothing in no time*

Okay, I think we're safe!

*steps back, and fire disappears* Can we get out of here now? *is shaking with effort of resisting drinking everyone dry of blood*

Most likely. Maybe we should stick with these guys for a while. They seem nice enough...

whew that was a close one!

Yeah, we're okay here. *Me and Jewel have to go for a while*

*fangs grow slighlty* I thin we should leave, the smell of the blood is driving me insane

im not sure if thats a good idea staying here *glances at silveera*

Umm, *still shaking with repressed blood-lust* thought.... where are my weapons? *looks around* I can't leave with out them

peers arond a ses a faint gleam in the far area of the cave* maybe those are it *points*

*manages to control urge to rip out catc juggular (XD) and looks where she is pointing* maybe, let's look

(O.O xD ) *goes over past the hyenas that are getting drowsy towards the gleam*

*follows, being VERY careful not to step on any hyenas* *as we get closer we see that the gleam isn't my weapons, but something completely different.... a large half-lidded eye about the size of a human head*

Oh my well thats certainly not our weapons O.O *fights urge to poke it to see if its alive but then notices the steady breathing*

*the thing is so large that it's breath is like small gusts of wind* *far to the laft of us I notice our weapons... underneath it's HUGE clawed foot* Crud

now thats gonna be a problem... wat do u think we should do? (wow this thing needs a breath mint!)

Ummm, no idea *suddenley the things breathing becomes deeper and less steady* oh crud *backs away as it's eye flutters and it's pupil dialtes*

Dear gods, that's huge...but is it a dragon?

OOC: *is slightly upset that you would start a new rp when I'm still in great danger of being eaten on our last rp*

@Jewel: I have no clue when you're gonna read this and I have so many things to say to you ,but its hard to know where to start...You're art is much better than you think it is... and I'm glad I could pay a small role in getting you to draw again... I'm sorry for the way I've been recently... I've been stressed out and every force there is out there seems to be working against me. You should really start drawing more pictures again. As far as giving up on WoW a little bit...? I'll tell you that soon... just don't become like HIM. Because he'll be a father at 17 and won't have a decent job to provide for his kid and he'll CONTINUE playing games and ignoring everything important... you're better than that and I want you to know it...