neat!

Deidara in the file name? xD like the shemale character from naruto? hehe. Hmm, crits. The tail is kinda wobbly, and unless you were going for a malnourished look he's extremely thin. It would look better finished, but it's a good start. ^^

Naruto? No, I didn't name it off of that... It came completely out of my imagination. it's not supposed to be malnourished, but he is supposed to be thin, giving him the snakelike look. I do not know what you mean by wobbly, but it supposed to look like it is moving and twisting. Thank you for the crits, Aiolos. Thank you, I_heart_Dragons.

the tail looks a bit of but apart form that coolies

I like long twisting tails and stuffs... I don't get why nobody likes it.

Huh. Haha, sorry for comparing it to the horror that is naruto, Night. And here, I'll go into some detail on the tail for you. The thickness isn't very consistent, for one. It varies from thin to thick in different places, when it should start out thick and gradually get thinner as it nears the end. Second, it starts out totally straight at the base and continues a good ways down the tail. If you want it to have more of a 'flowing' appearence, it should begin curving near the base. It sorta looks like the tail is supported by bone up until the first loop, where the bone suddenly ends and the rest of his tail is at the mercy of the wind. And lastly, on most of the places you've made it curve, the angles are very sharp. If his tail /is/ supported by bone down to the tip, it would never be able to bend at such harsh angles. Unless it's extremelyextremely flexible. I hope that doesn't sound mean to you, I'm just trying to help out a bit. ;___; And for his body, if you want it to look more snakelike I'd consider making it a little longer. Or, if you want to keep it this length, you could flatten the chest a bit. I didn't mention this before (actually I didn't really notice it xD ) but he seems somewhat barrel-chested. AGAIN, I don't want to sound meaaaan.... D:

Nono, it's fine! Thanks for criticizing me! I should learn from my mistakes. Thanks, again!

Ah, you're welcome then. xD

TWISTY TAIL!!! *pulls on twisty tail*

Hehee... TWIIIISSSTTTYYY!!!!