What, no comments here yet ? so... First! This looks good, the pink colouring is very nice, but I think the neck is too thick, and the wings could be more muscular. They should also be fixed to the body behind the legs

Yeah...this again is something that looks really cool at first glance, but could defintely use a lot more work on the details. So...let us begin, shall we? 1) The neck is overall too thick 2) the forelegs connection to the chest is way wrong, it should not be closed off unless you're drawing a toy of sorts. 3) the wings are in completey the wrong position, and the web beween the wings needs to connect to the body, not just disappear into space. 4) The tail is very unsmooth overall 5) the back legs look very awkwardly positioned and drawn 6) Very minor details: the head decorations are at the wrong angle, and the front claw is placed directly over the other front foot. Anyway, I hope you don't take offense at anything I said, I'm just pointing out issues. ALso, when are you coming back on? I miss you!

HOLY SMOKES Hi Nighthawk! ^^ *giant grin* Lol, where've you been? And your art is as lovely as ever; coloring's goregeous.

Nighthawk doesn't come on... T-T but but but...you're on Jade! YAY! *uber glomps you* How've you been?!? I hasn't seen you in FORAVARZ!